Vile-Pudding's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[littleFoot]

Awesome

By far the best animation I've seen. The only thing I found wrong with it was the sound sync, but we all get the idea. (5/5, 10/10)

~Dark One

[Magus Bros Christmas]

DING!!!

^^

ShadowWarriorLuke responds:

Thanks.

[PSM2: Preview Movie]

Frankly....

I thought that was hilarious. Keep this up!

[The Touchtone Genius]

Bravo!

Best animation in a long time! Very addicting; can't stop watching it. The expressions on that guy's face are perfect, this really can't get any better, save making it longer.
:):):):):):):):)

[Kaiblade The trailer]

Ok... it's a start...

What can I say?

1) Correct your spelling: ie, 'thier' should be spelled 'their,' 'ethier' should be spelled 'either' and grammatical errors 'except for the elves they were the strongest.' put a period or perhaps a semicolon after the word 'elves'

2) You did a good job of making it long, but it was as boring as hell. Personally, this would not be the type of animation I'd like to watch. Put less loop on and make the music less monotonous. Maybe add a narrator's voice for more effect.

3) Definately take out a lot of the repeated scenes (like the shot with the arrows). Those were really boring. The last thing people want to see is someone shooting an arrow 4 times in a row.

4) If all possible, add shading. Some of the scenes were a little wronchy (weird word, don't ever use it) and kind of hard to tell which was close or far (ie, the scene with the big ball of light the elf was making).

5) You have potential with your storyline. Just go back and make things have more action. Also add the illusion of velocity by Easing your tweens. This would make a good story if everything didn't move at such a constant rate.

With these things, I'd gladly hand out a 10. But remember: It's not the effort that counts; it's the finished product.

I could put 5 hours of thought put into one small scene, but when it comes down to it, i could've just made an outline and added details as I went. It seemed you put a lot of thought into this, but what came out smelt like, well, crap.

Try harder. I'm still willing to protect this solely because I think you have a lot of potential :)