Vile-Pudding's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[littleFoot]

Awesome

By far the best animation I've seen. The only thing I found wrong with it was the sound sync, but we all get the idea. (5/5, 10/10)

~Dark One

[A Better World?]

_

Wow you failed your history exam. Nothing informative, just a bunch of pics.

[Magus Bros Christmas]

DING!!!

^^

ShadowWarriorLuke responds:

Thanks.

[Imagine all the people..]

Well done! 5/5

Good animation and idea, but the scenes were really monotonous. Any animation that goes with that song should be more... Tranquilly violent. Like showing war scenes that completely contradict with the music. In a way that would show how life is now and be more compelling. Great choice in music btw, and I hope this passes!

666shade666 responds:

it passed ^^ thnx anyway

[Imagine All the People P1]

5/5

Very touching, 10/10 for music choice.

The only thing I'd say... graphics. You know what to do

Awesome. Probably best 500kb animation I've seen

[Just A Bad Day]

Good

A few things:

1. Use a preloader.
2. Do something with that "ouch" towards the end. It kinda just stays there...
3. Use a preloader.
4. Work on the computer screen. It never hurts to take a screenshot (ALT+PrintScreen) Just hit Ctrl+V in the screen you want to paste it, just fyi.
5. Yeah... The wtf was backwards...
6. Never tell anyone that took you whatever amount of time, you are so bad, or whatever. "Yeah i'm a noob, worked on this for about 8 hours, vote 5 plzkthx." No one ever wants to hear that. Ever.
7. Uhhh... Use a preloader.

Good job! Just spend more time next time and you'll have it :)

Trippy-Hippie responds:

FUCK! man... dammit i thought the preloader worked!
I downloaded an NG preloader and just fancied it up a bit. Im not sure what went wronge.

whatever. Thanks for the "constructive criticism" it helps

[PSM2: Preview Movie]

Frankly....

I thought that was hilarious. Keep this up!

[The Touchtone Genius]

Bravo!

Best animation in a long time! Very addicting; can't stop watching it. The expressions on that guy's face are perfect, this really can't get any better, save making it longer.
:):):):):):):):)

[The Beatles: Solid John]

Good

Next time, perhaps make it longer and the graphics smoother. The sight on the gun is a little off. You have potential, and keep up this Beatles thing :)

[Kaiblade The trailer]

Ok... it's a start...

What can I say?

1) Correct your spelling: ie, 'thier' should be spelled 'their,' 'ethier' should be spelled 'either' and grammatical errors 'except for the elves they were the strongest.' put a period or perhaps a semicolon after the word 'elves'

2) You did a good job of making it long, but it was as boring as hell. Personally, this would not be the type of animation I'd like to watch. Put less loop on and make the music less monotonous. Maybe add a narrator's voice for more effect.

3) Definately take out a lot of the repeated scenes (like the shot with the arrows). Those were really boring. The last thing people want to see is someone shooting an arrow 4 times in a row.

4) If all possible, add shading. Some of the scenes were a little wronchy (weird word, don't ever use it) and kind of hard to tell which was close or far (ie, the scene with the big ball of light the elf was making).

5) You have potential with your storyline. Just go back and make things have more action. Also add the illusion of velocity by Easing your tweens. This would make a good story if everything didn't move at such a constant rate.

With these things, I'd gladly hand out a 10. But remember: It's not the effort that counts; it's the finished product.

I could put 5 hours of thought put into one small scene, but when it comes down to it, i could've just made an outline and added details as I went. It seemed you put a lot of thought into this, but what came out smelt like, well, crap.

Try harder. I'm still willing to protect this solely because I think you have a lot of potential :)