Really good
I don't care how short that was. It was still really well done. I liked the choreography of the fight scene and when he gets his torso blown off.
You should make a full-length movie out of this.
Really good
I don't care how short that was. It was still really well done. I liked the choreography of the fight scene and when he gets his torso blown off.
You should make a full-length movie out of this.
Good
Just needs more action and more dialogue.
Funny though, I liked how you made fun of pokemon.
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Pokemon is a sad state of afairs:(
Holy crap...
If this doesn't deserve front page, I don't know what does.
Excellent work.
Good
A few things:
1) Add sound and music
2) Make actions slow down and speed up as needed (don't make everything go at the same speed).
3) More violence, work on blood a little (tutorials).
4) Make it BIGGER
Great work, just needs those things :)
Hilarious!
I loved it! Make more!
Yay sticks
Your offer to respond to all reviews compelled me to write a good one.
The beginning graphics were amazing. I don't know how (or if) you did them, but they were good anyway. Even though this was a stick flash, I still thought the style of this was great. The plot is almost like my friends and me in a LAN party. Sound was good, violence would've been better if it had been finished, but was still well done anyway. Pretty funny, made me laugh a few times, but again, would be much better as a finished product. Overall, I gave this a 10 because I think you put a ton of effort into this (or if you didn't, are really good at flash), and the unfinished product came out nicely, even though there are a few kinks you should work out. Those are:
Make the sticks bob up and down slightly when they walk
Don't go overboard with the concept of a color gradient. You don't have to show the entire range of color; you can move the fill around.
Other than that, excellent work, and I eagerly await the future installments of this series :)
Really now, that was a good review i think. Yea, i did the beginning graphics. And ummm... so if i suck at flash it takes forever for me to do them right? this thing took, well a lot longer than a week haha. Well Thanks, i like tips on what i need to do, ill get on the bobbing right away and i'll remember what u said about color gradient. Yea, it's beginning is based on me and my 2 best friends so that's good that u caught it. Dont worry, the end result will have everyone smiling.
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Funny, and true. I'm just glad my mother doesn't do that to me.
First they tell you you have something on your chin. They smudge it off. Then they tell you to wash your face.
This deserves a loud, cataclysmic 'LOL.'
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