Vile-Pudding's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Just A Bad Day]

Good

A few things:

1. Use a preloader.
2. Do something with that "ouch" towards the end. It kinda just stays there...
3. Use a preloader.
4. Work on the computer screen. It never hurts to take a screenshot (ALT+PrintScreen) Just hit Ctrl+V in the screen you want to paste it, just fyi.
5. Yeah... The wtf was backwards...
6. Never tell anyone that took you whatever amount of time, you are so bad, or whatever. "Yeah i'm a noob, worked on this for about 8 hours, vote 5 plzkthx." No one ever wants to hear that. Ever.
7. Uhhh... Use a preloader.

Good job! Just spend more time next time and you'll have it :)

Trippy-Hippie responds:

FUCK! man... dammit i thought the preloader worked!
I downloaded an NG preloader and just fancied it up a bit. Im not sure what went wronge.

whatever. Thanks for the "constructive criticism" it helps